Reviews

Yami no Matsuei: Fire and Shadows: Anniversary

Lothlorien

AMAZING!! I love the way you write...very IC and brilliant descriptions...you make the reader feel what the characters are feeling. I honestly can't wait to see more of this!!

bestbits: The bit where Tsuzuki explains about the bomb and then he says that Tatsumi protected him with his shadows. Oh, and the Tatsumi/Watari bit, when Watari kisses Tatsumi. *shudder* amazing....

Beruda

I loved it. I really like the backdrop you've set up for this story, it's really fasinating and interesting. I think you characters are dead on. Even though I'm a diehard Tat+Tzu fan I like the way Tsuzuki and Hisoka are getting closer, it's very touching and it makes sense. Although I can empathise with Tsuzuki's feelings of abandoment, I felt he brushed Tatsumi off that faithful nite. I'm still a little confused about that actually but whatever it's cool. Looking forward to more, :)

bestbits: Tsuzuki's conversation with Hisoka, and the encounter between Tatsumi and Watari, very sensual.

White Angel

OH MAH GAWD!!!! I laughed..........I cried.......I got all warm and eewee.......(oh Watari!)........I can't wait for you to post more!

bestbits: Definitely the WatarixTatsumi scene..........as well as the TsuzukixHisoka fluff.......I love it all!

lyn

hi!
i dont know what to say,mainly because my english sucks and i cant express myself properly (-_-;),but i loved this fic (and devastation too) soo much,that i had to write to you,at least a couple of lines.
i'm a fan of fics,loooove reading them,and yours are truly wonderful! i love the story, and admire the fact that you decided to include terrible things like the second war and the h bomb, i dont think anybody did that before.
about the pairings, well tats-tsu it's my favourite ever,so nothing to complain there.when i reached the part about tats and watari i started to feel a little dissapointed,i'm a sappy girl who'd like to have a happy t+t ending,or if not happy,at least a t+t ending, 'cause i'd say that i hate wat+tats (i noticed lately that there's a proliferation (is that a word?) of this couple),so everytime i found a w+t fic,y run away,but this time i kept reading and i must admit that i really like it!maybe you'll turn me into a w+t lover!i dont know, i cant imagine how you're gonna finish this story(i hope t+t),but i'll respect wherever you write.just as long you keep writing!i'm very intrigued about this 'resurgence'......
luv,lyn , aka 'waiting desperately for next chapter'

Avidchick

Wow. Here I was, bemoaning the fact that Laekin had stopped writing her beautiful Watari/Tatsumi stories, and then I stumble across these! I knew I loved your Yohji/Aya works (purrrrrrr!!!!!!)but you have blown me away. I am a sucker for a well eritten Watari, one that is a mad scientist but also still the most emotionally stable of the Yami crew. You captured just the right amount of concern, playfullness and genius that I think makes him such a great character. And as a Wat/Tat shipper, I had to love Anniversary- even if it breaks my heart and you don't have W/T end up together. All in all, please keep up the fantastic work! And yippee for having a place where I can get quality Weib and Yami fics!

bestbits: What to choose? Too hard!!!! Ummmm, Watari's knowledge of Tatsumi (For a moment he thought Tatsumi was going to feign innocence, but of course he knew better than to try and fool Watari. Not that Watari doubted for a moment that Tatsumi genuinely mourned the disaster and respected those who were suffering. But there was a particular look in his eyes, a kind of sad affection, that was associated with just one person....), the funny little details (A shimmer in the air, and Tatsumi stood before him, with, for some reason, 003 perched on his shoulder. ) And do I sound like a total perv if I say the sex? Both stories were just right!

RubyD

I loved it. One of my favorites now. This is a very well-written story, with a wonderful take on the characters that seems so realistic. I really like that you placed the history surrounding the era into it so prominently. I definitely enjoy your balancing with the group dynamics and relationships, and treating every character with respect. It's sweet, subtle, heartbreaking and heartwarming at the same time, and erotic. There's a weight to this story that I don't see in many others, something that firmly grounds the plot and its character to the real world and their actions be natural. I hurt for Tatsusumi and Tsuzuki, and I also adore Tsuzuki and Hisoka. Watari was great. ;) And 003 is my favorite just because.

Apologies for the incoherent fangirling, I love this story so much. I hope to see more soon!

bestbits: "He wanted to stroke back the strand of hair that was tickling Hisoka's nose and making him frown, but didn't dare."
" A shimmer in the air, and Tatsumi stood before him, with, for some reason, 003 perched on his shoulder." (The image just makes me wibble in the cuteness.)
" scooped up a grumbling 003, who had looked all set to sleep snuggled up to Hisoka" (...so cute.)

Nobaku

THis is very good. I can't wait to see the next chapter. I do have to say one thing though *sheepish grin* I have been reading your stuff for a while and didn't realize there was a review section.

I hope you keep up your YnM fanfics it is hard to find ones that are acctualy interesting. Which is sad because I love the anime/manga