Reviews

Weiß Kreuz ~ Bonding: Late

paxnirvana

*THUD!* Wha... where... um... whoa... can't believe it but it got better. *grin* So nicely done, my dear. Sweet, sweet!*waves happily from the floor*bestbits: *ummm...* Aya falling to the floor in a daze... LOL!

lisabee

This is wonderful. I hopped over here from Pira's (art) journal, and am I ever glad I did. The characterizations work really well, and it is so incredibly hot. The fact that at first you think Aya's waiting for Yoji to come in for his shift is a nice twist, since it ends up flipping your initial expectations on their heads, in a good way. It turns what can sometimes be a very over-done cliche (Aya-Yoji suppressed lust breaks out for _insert reason here_) into an interesting and original scenario.
It's rare to find PWPs (hopefully that term doesn't offend you) that are entirely free of distractions--by that I mean ones whose writing, characterization, actions, tone all combine into a convincing smooth flowing story. Thanks! bestbits: Honestly? I couldn't choose. The "thirty minutes" "ten minutes" bit was quite amusing, though.

Theresa

Outstanding. bestbits: I particularly liked Aya's characterization. I was impressed by the way you showed his vulnerability, but still made him willing to take the risk.