Reviews

Final Fantasy ~ Sands of Time: Memories

Brad

Hey there i just finished reading memories and i thought it was amazing you really captured the characters personalities. Im not to sure about squall being biosexual but its a small price to pay for such a great story. (please continue with legacy i support you all the way).

Unchained Phoenix

Wee, I just finished reading today. It took me about a week to read the whole thing (it's exam week, that's why), and I must say that this is easily the best fanfic i've ever read. Most fanfics i've read lack detail and a strong storyline, but Memories really raises the bar. I was amazed with the detail and plot twists, and it looks like so much effort and determination was put forth from the start until the finish. A brilliant read--can't wait for Legacy!

Bleed to Blue

After reading Sniper Sluts in Tokyo (I'm a huge WK fan) I was so enamoured of Squall and Irvine I wanted to know more. What an excellent story. I must admit that my absolute favorite part is pink as the color of evil, but it's all good.

Raven

Although I haven`t read the story to the end, I just have to review. I`ve read 13 chapters until now, and I read them in one night. I just couldn`t stop, its just a great story, probably the best ff8 fanfic I`ve read so far, because it concentrates on the people of the game. I think the characters are perfectly described, so just a great story, and so long! ( Although in my opinion it could have even mor than 1000 pages )
I enjoyed reading so far and I will review again, when I`m finished with it.

Aaron Johnson

i thought the story line was great you put true effort into writing these stories and im glad you did like most people they rush them but you took your time and put real detail into them. I like the way you described the sex scene(i sound like a dick head now dont i?) you put a lot of detail into them as well, but i wasnt to keen on the gay sence's sorry. i really liked the ones between rinoa and squall. well i just wanted to say i want you to keep writing ff8 fan fictions your great and thanks for the entertainment

bestbits: ALL OF IT!

Cynthia

The story is magnificent... no, wait... glorious!

The narrative is so fluid, the paragraphs constructed so richly, the descriptions so vivid that it is impossible to put it down. Trust me! I tried, but I started at 4 in the afternoon and was unable to turn my computer off until 11 am the next morning - I just couldn't let go of Squall and Irvine and Rinoa and Frila...

I found myself so deeply inside the story -squealing with delight, tearing up in joy, melting in passion - and chapter after chapter the writer carried me though and lead me to the beautifully crafted conclusion.

I enjoyed every single image that the words created in my mind. Every chapter is a work of art and the complete story is truly a masterpiece!

Keep up the amazing work!

Sharon

This was one of the best stories I have ever read.....I have fallen in love with all the characters. After reading the one-shots I decided I liked FF8 enough to keep going.....when I saw this fic had 37 chapters I wasn't sure I would get through it all....but each chapter just kept getting better and better and I just had to keep reading to see what was going to happen. I have decided that Irvine is my favourite character.....I love his attitude..his loyalty to his friends...and most of all I love his guardian Ether. You make the greatest love scenes drool drool....love the threesomes....This fic had played on all my senses...it had me laughing....crying...excited....you name it I was there, it was wonderful. I plan to read your sequel next.

bestbits: I love when Irvine, Squall and Rinoa kept having the same dreams. I kept wondering when Seifer showed up it there was going to be a fight and Irvine was going to be hurt.

elenakento

At first I wasn't even sure I wanted to read this story, but then I thought, what the heck. It took me a while but as I got further in to it I found it harder and harder to pull myself out. In the end I just stopped trying and ended up reading the last ten chapters straight through. I enjoyed your story thoroughly and I can't wait to read Legacy. Thank you for such a wonderful trip back into the Garden we all love.

Alice

Wow... I have to say i ADORED your story. It was so different than any of the fanfics i've read. I found the whole mind-control thing very interesting. You did a real good job on developing the "bad guy". You had a whole story there, not a "non-story stolen from the plot of the game". And damn if that story wasn't hot. haha.
I was hoping for a Irvine/Selphie sex scene. I found Xu disapointing. Also was hoping for Zell to find someone. Maybe in your sequal? Well overall it was fantastic and i really enjoyed it.

bestbits: When Frila finally convinces Irvine to be with her. "Want... need..." "then take" Very very hot. I also love the way you built up Squall's personality. Not closed off, but willing to fuck anywhere. And i was very pleased to actually see a pleasant Rinoa. All trained up and no longer a priss. I also like the whole father son thing between Laguna and Squall. Ether... i think he was my favorite character lol.